Tuesday, 5 November 2013
Major Project Unit: Revised Script
Me and Jamie have revised the storyline slightly for our project, including a different opening scene and reducing the amount of voiceover in the film. This means we are able to tell the story more through the pictures, and less through the voiceover. Here is the revised script.
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Thanks for uploading this - I couldn't discern much of a re-write other than adding the scene at the cemetery - the voice over is still trying to do the job of filling in massive story gaps and this is still not working. Please can this be addressed urgently!
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