Major Project: Reflection on Feedback

After my tutorial today, there are a few areas that I need to improve regarding my story. There are several grey areas in my plot at the moment. These include the following:

• Giving a reason as to why Aidan gets involved in drifting in the first place
• The garage he works in assists in the preparation of drift cars
• Perhaps he is down on his luck and this is why he sets off on his journey?
• There has to be a more definitive reason for John's death. Either his dad did cause it or he didn't
• Have a more cast iron reason for why Aidan goes motor racing in the first place
• Keeps it a secret from his father until he has a serious crash and his father demands to know how and why it happened
• The idea of film footage of John's death is a good idea. Requires more development
• Condense the timeline and set the events over less than a year