Here is my progress on the second sequence of my story.
In the immediate aftermath of the crash, the
entire arena is in shock. The yellow flag is waved to signal the race has been
halted, and all the other drivers come to a stop and switch off their engines.
As they get out of their cars, they all look at each other in disbelief, and
then all stare intensely at the flaming wreck that was once John’s car. They
are all in complete shock, but unlike the crowd, there are not in disbelief, as
this is banger racing, and whilst a driver dying is incredibly rare, it is not
unheard of, as it is a contact sport after all. Aidan and Ted are still trying
to fight their way through the enormous crowd to get to John, even though they
both know in their hearts that John is already dead.
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